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The quote

 

 

A quote roamed around on msn...finally reaching someone that really thought about it... the quote was "a class friend...an occasional friend...a life-long friend...which one r u..."... he thought about it 4 a long time.... and never really found an answer and eventually 4got and closed the quote


but that was not the last time he heard about it...1 week later he received the same quote...and he decided to pass it on to his contact list.... he eventually told the girl that he liked.... but she only responded wit silence....heartbroken he signed off...

a few weeks later..... He had forgotten about the quote and never heard of it again...until he was approached wit the girl he liked at school.... remember the quote that u sent me she asked...he barely remembered... well I began to think she said.... I don’t want 2 b a class friend...I don’t want to be a occasional friend...and I don’t want to be a lifelong friend.... after hearing this he turn and was about to walk away heartbroken.... but she then grabbed his hand.... turned him around and said... I want 2 be this.... and kissed him...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                     Sacrifice

 

 

 

A guy walks down the hall of his school.... think bout asking the girl of his dreams out...as he sees her.... he finally finds the courage to ask her out...he runs up to her...nervously asking her if she wants 2 see a movie.... but she said that she would go 2 the movies but never wit u.... coldly turning him down... she and her friends start laughing as he runs away crying only leaving a trail of tears of the hallway floor...

after laughing wit her friends at the hilarious sight she decides to go to a friends house... as talks wit her friends she steps put on to the street...never noticing the bus that just started 2 move in front of her... she looks at the last moment and sees the bus approach her.....she then feels a touch pushing her away.... she looks back seeing the boy that she coldly turned down...pushing her away to safety.....


After running from the most horrible moment of his life... he hides in a patch of trees near a bus stop.... he takes his time to think about what he had just done.... how stupid his decision was.... how hopeless his life is.... he finally decides to end it pulling out a knife... and putting it 2 his wrist... he notices the girl.... the girl that he confessed his love to... the girl that coldly turned him down.... he also notices a buss moving towards her... he drops the knife running to save her life....pushing her 2 safety..... As he looks and sees a bus heading toward him....


as the bus stops after hitting the boy.... a shocked face appears on the girl as she looks at the horrendous sight that is laid out b4 her...she quickly rushes to the boys side... ask him y he saved her.... he just looked at her kissed her on the cheek.... and closed his eye and taking his last breath....

 

 

 

                            Bad time well spent

 

 

5:00p.m.

Finally our first date.... I’ve finally did it.... ohm shit I’m going to b l8....


5:30 p.m.

Wow.... I made it in time.... now where is she...

5:31p.m.
There she is.... a she look sexy.... I wish I can get in to those pants...

6; 30 pm

wow...bracken demises... first those guys take our table...then those guys think that they have the right 2 try and hit on her... wow how fukin stupid r they....

8:30pm

frick...the movie we wanted c sold out... what can possibly go wrong wit this date.... wait wtf...where’s my wallet...FUK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

9:00 pm

wow.... I might as well take her home.... this date flopped


9:30p.m.

Well we're here on her door stop...I don’t know what 2 say...I’m thinking that I should ask 4 another date...but she will drolly turn me down.... I’m just going to mutter something and walk aw.... she kissed me but y... she had a good time...how.... this date completely failed...what she liked being around me.... and she actually liked me.... wow...this caught me surprise...as I walk away...I think of our next date...

 

 

 

 

                                   Heartbreak

 

 

Unknown to most of the world...a gr9 student never did much 2 improve his popularity...always did the same things...never making a name 4 himself.... he always had the same friends...always played cards at lunch...but there was 1 thing he did differently...he made a new friend... a girl...the girl that he liked...but she never knew...he had one chance of asking her out...finally...when he found the courage 2 ask her out...he saw her holding hands wit another guy...


finally...gr10...a new year....a fresh start he thought.....he never thought of her or that day in gr9...he was just feeling confused....... she was just in 1 of his classes....he always felt confused bout love.....never sure on who he likes....but then started 2 notice her again....then all the memories came back.....all the memories of them being friends.....the memory of that day..... He got news that the guy that she was holding hands wit broke up wit her...his feelings 4 her became more strong.... he finally got the courage 2 ask her out again...after class...he looked 4 her...he saw her.... he was about 2 say something.... but then he saw another guy approach.... and he girl of his dreams kissed the guy...

 

 

 

 

                                       Inspiration

 

As I lay on my bed.... waiting 4 inspiration 2 hit me in the face...I flip thru the channels on the TV put in front of me...hoping for a news repot...a music video.... anything 2 help me start writing again... i then hear a familiar sound...the sound of some 1 messaging me... as i look up.... i c my friend.... asking me to play starcraft.... i reluctantly agree...hoping that something in the game would inspire me... and 2 no surprise...none....


a few hours later.... after the search 4 inspiration on TV failed miserably.... i begin to just watch TV out of boredom......i hear the noise i hear from b4.....another message.....another friend..... I ask him 4 sum help on finding inspiration.... he suggests me 2 listen 2 music... as I look at my music library...I find a few songs that might inspire me.... as I listen to them.... I find nothing good...

as I wait sum more... I hear the same noise...I look up... i c a flashing window...its a message from the girl i like.... i think.... should i ask her 4 inspiration.... all the people that tried 2 help me failed...so i just talk wit her normally...as i started 2 get frustrated.... i just start reading stuff on my comp...as i read the convo that me and the girl has...something just hit me...i begin writing.... don’t where the inspiration came from...but i just continued writing...then it just suddenly hit me... i type on the convo i had wit the girl and i send her the link..... She said it was a good story...I said u were my inspiration....

 

 

 

 

                                    Unseen love

 

 

 

He stares at her... Every Chance he gets.... it’s impossible for him to get his eyes off a girl who is the perfect image of an Angel in his mind...she always knew that he stares at her.... she always knew that he likes her...but never took him serious.... she just didn’t bother wit him...she just dint want 2 break his heart... everyday...he tried 2 make conversion.... she always just spoke half mindedly to him.... she always thought that they’re conversation were just a waste of time...she always tried her best to avoid him...... she just wished that he was out of her life.....


As the next school year began...se hoped that the guy would just leave her alone... she just walked in to the cafeteria...expecting the boy to approach her.... starting up a conversation...but 2 her surprise...there was no boy trying to talk wit her...the bell rang...thinking that the boy would try and talk wit her in the halls.... again no surprise...as the announcements was read over the p.a....she thought about what happened 2 the boy.... her teacher just walked in to the room sat on the front desk and said this 2 the class..... "This is a sad beginning 4 our school year...a boy that we knew named"...the girl recognized the name..."will not be with us this year.... he hanged him self during the school holidays...the last thing that he wrote was...."how come u never realized i really loved u"...

 

                               

 

 






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sum stories comin soon.......the origanal place where i created it........

http://www.livejournal.com/users/maxpowers84/

thnx to: sarah 4 the help 4 the 6th story....nd mik 4 the idea....
 
 
 

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